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Submitted: October 24, 2011
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SYAC-Persistence Of Vision 01by *TomPreston

Cartoons & Comics / Traditional Media / Comics / Pages

I haven’t finished coloring this series yet but I felt it was time to start uploading it. It’s kind of a corny title for the story, but I have a tendency to do that...

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If you prefer, you can read the entire comic as one big scrolling image instead of as individual pages. The big version is located at this [link] but be warned that it is a huge file and if you have a slower internet connection it might a while to load entirely.

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~NoraNeku May 11, 2012

like a boss

~aug325 Nov 30, 2011 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

"Show don't tell"

that's a basic storytelling tool. I was unable to feel for her character at all because I have never had an experience like this so the whole thing seemed surreal to me. (Yes, I have co-writers at times but we always function as a team.)

So the idea of friends writing her story for her is in fact alien to me, and I wasn't able to feel anything for her or her underdeveloped friends.

The Tenko story definitely had more heart.

!practical-hetalia Nov 28, 2011

shittyly drawn comic

~Asrath Dec 10, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

Why do you say that!? Are you any better, huh!?

!speshuuCHAN Dec 11, 2011 Professional Digital Artist

as a matter of fact shuu [link] <--that was just a rushed practice comic. practical-hetalia dose drawings from scratch shuu, also i think you should look at his japan x america drawing

oh and he cant reply to you because he got preston banned fggt deshuu.

~Asrath Dec 11, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

Okay, nice, nice, but is that a reason why you should say it's a shitty drawn comic? Just because you think (or Practical-Hetalia thinks) you are much, much better?
I think that there can be learned lots from this comic for people like him, since I think he has a lot of potential, but atm. I am not quite convinced, and it's definitely not better than this comic.

I mean, MAN! Even if he was the most talented artist in the world, is that a reason why you should say such senseless things, not even giving arguments WHY it is shitty, or saying "this can be better" instead of "this sux"...
P_P

!speshuuCHAN Dec 11, 2011 Professional Digital Artist

WHAT WE SHOULD BE ABLE TO SAY IF WE THINK A COMIC IS SHIT OR NOT!

ALSO COUSIN TIME! [link] MAYBEE annunaki-GOD- could of done as good as lord-preston-SAMA if he used a template first... OR MAYBEE NOT [link]