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February 16, 2012
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SYAC - Poster Sketch 1 by TomPreston SYAC - Poster Sketch 1 by TomPreston
This is a rough sketch for a poster I want to make with SYAC. There's a lot wrong with it, I know, so I want as much advice as possible.

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Well, if that's supposed to be lightning hitting the paper I say you should add more darker clouds to give the thunder storm effect. I think it's just me but I think you should add your hat. I find it's your trade mark plus I also love the hat! If it's supposed to be a serious picture (thats what I'm getting from their facial expressions) Joe should also have a serious expression.

That's all I can think of, I hope what I said helped any. Love your work keep it up! Visit Canada (Maritimes) if you can sometime please.

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First off, Pam is the only one not looking up; instead she appears to be looking out at the viewer. That draws attention away from the main focus of the drawing. Try to position the pupils so that it at least appears like she is looking in the direction everyone else is. Then the attention will be back to where it should be. Secondly, the top part of the page lacks detail yet the bottom is full of it. You should try to even that out by adding flashier colors or more detail near the top once as it is being colored. Otherwise, this is pretty cool!
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AvraTheLittleArtist Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
It really nice a big fan (?) of your work :)... Er where can i find similar et paper to this to sketch ???or the oublisher gave it to ya :|
xXIshisuXx Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
dat ish one badass sketch ewe
Swarrm Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012
Looks like a "ten Commandments" type of thing
Pentaro22 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
He's a badass!!!!!
Klecktacular Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're probably not going to read this but your back looks really stiff and the other characters look abnormally large in comparison to you
MinisculeHeartBeat Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I can see Tenko but where's Chloe? She's my favorite!
xion088 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student General Artist
epic sketchiness in the sketchy sketch. -.-
RynnLight Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
I know it's just a sketch, but I wanted to fav it anyways XD
TsawlaEltuTsamsiyu Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Student General Artist
It looks good! There's not much I can say that you could do with this because it's just a sketch, or rather there's too much I could say! I'd like to see it a little later down the road and maybe then I'll have some more precise advice for you.
My friends reading over my shoulder said, "That is hardcore." So we all approve.

No, these are not the same friends that live inside my head. Those are different ones.
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