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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The punchline didn't justify the amount of panels it took to set up the joke. The punchline itself was bland to say the least, facepalm jokes are so overused and unfunny. Maybe if the character had a completely over-the-top reaction that lasted more than one panel I would have enjoyed it more.
The actual art is colored well and I like the shading. The only problem I have with it was the gradient backgrounds which I find irritating.
Overall, I think that this is an incredibly bland webcomic.
I think what I loved so much about this particular is the face in the fourth panel. That to me is what a facepalm should DEFINITELY look like, haha.
I want to say that I absolutely love your technique on this: simplistic, but detailed enough that you can get your point across without getting too ridiculously intricate. I love love love the expressions you use.
The only thing that irks me about this is the color of the Mac; I'm not sure why, maybe because I'm used to seeing white Mac Monitors, but for some reason it irks me. Oh, that is a good-sized desk. I need to buy one of those haha.
As a fellow artist, I know the feeling associated with the reverse psychology. You tell them not to say anything, and it's all they can talk about... Aggravating, that's for sure. And then you get so busy you can't even go back to fix it and it just irks you for DAYS-- or maybe that's just me, haha.
All in all, this particular comic made me LAUGH, after having a very stressful day. I loved the simple message portrayed in it, and thought it was well conveyed. I LOVE the fourth and second panel, and think this was a job well done.
-Amaris
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